An observation into all relationship couples that observe one another and compete into who has a better relationship than the other. That’s my take on your poem. I really enjoyed every line and the whole poem rings truth.
Thank you 🙂 Yes I agree, I was trying to speak on how different people have different ideals of happiness. And one shouldn’t project their type of happiness to another. Thanks for sharing your thoughts friend
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Bellissimo!!
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Grazie mamma!
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An observation into all relationship couples that observe one another and compete into who has a better relationship than the other. That’s my take on your poem. I really enjoyed every line and the whole poem rings truth.
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Thank you 🙂 Yes I agree, I was trying to speak on how different people have different ideals of happiness. And one shouldn’t project their type of happiness to another. Thanks for sharing your thoughts friend
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Excellent points.
One should just be humble for what they have and be happy with the end result.
You are welcome my friend. Bless you so much. 🙂
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